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I urgenlty need you to check these sentence. Thank you.

1) I'm emailing you the (required/requested??) information to your school address hoping that your school computer is working now (How do you express tha fact that the computer has broken down?)
2) As I wrote to you in my previous email, I will be pleased to write up the English version of the project but I entirely rely on you and the French school to draw up the content of the project.
3) The idea of making a film out of our scientific experience is particularly interesting and should be included both among the objectives and the results to be achieved by the students.
4) Writeacher, what is your personal opinion about making a film out of our project on biodiversity of water?

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    1) I'm emailing the requested information to your school address, hoping that your school computer is working now. (How do you express tha fact that the computer has broken down? <~~Slang would be this: ... hoping that your computer-crash has been fixed by now!)

    2) As I wrote in my previous email, I will be pleased to write up the English version of the project, but I entirely rely on you and the French school to draw up the content of the project.

    3) The idea of making a film out of our scientific experience is particularly interesting and should be included, both among the objectives and the results to be achieved by the students.

    4) Writeacher, what is your personal opinion about making a film out of our project on biodiversity of water? <~~Sounds good -- excellent documentation, as well as a way to study the whole project and make improvements for future projects.

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