I urgently need you to check these sentences, too. Thank you.
1) Hi Andrew, how are you?
I ‘m very well because I spent a very beautiful weekend with both my family and my friends.
2) On Saturday morning I played tennis with my father whereas in the afternoon I went out with my friends.
3) At half past six we went to the cinema and saw a film called “Immature, the Travel”.
4) It was a very funny comedy. When I was at the cinema , my parents decided to join us for an evening out.
5) We had a pizza together and after that all my friends came to my house and stayed there till one o’clock.
When they left, I was tired but happy. I had a really nice day.
1. OK
2. 2 commas needed.
3. comma needed
4. OK
5. comma needed
1) Hi Andrew, how are you?
I'm doing well because I had a wonderful weekend spent with both my family and friends.
2) On Saturday morning, I played tennis with my father, and in the afternoon, I went out with my friends.
3) At half past six, we went to the cinema and watched a film called "Immature, the Travel."
4) It was a very funny comedy. While I was at the cinema, my parents decided to join us for a night out.
5) We all had pizza together, and after that, all my friends came over to my house and stayed until one o'clock. When they left, I was tired but happy. I had a really nice day.
The sentences you provided seem to be grammatically correct, expressing your weekend activities. However, it is always helpful to proofread and check for any potential errors. Pay attention to punctuation, capitalization, and make sure the tenses are consistent throughout the text.