Revise and edit the following run-on sentence:
Data in computerized form is discoverable, even if paper "hard copies" of the information have been produced, the producing party can be required to design a computer program to extract the data from its computerized business records.
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Data in computerized form is discoverable, even if paper "hard copies" of the information have been produced. The producing party can be required to design a computer program to extract the data from its computerized business records.
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Sure! Here's a revised version of the run-on sentence:
"Data in computerized form is discoverable, even if paper 'hard copies' of the information have been produced. In such cases, the producing party may be required to develop a computer program to extract the data from its computerized business records."
To revise and edit the sentence, I split it into two sentences for clarity. Additionally, I replaced "can" with "may" to show that it is a possibility but not a certainty, and I used "develop" instead of "design" to better convey the idea of creating a computer program.