Could you help me check these sentences, please? They refer to the same theme as yesterday's ones. (Can you say that?)
1) We met my son’s ski instructor at the baby ski lift (?) at two sharp.
2) Most ski slopes are very simple and therefore suitable (right) for families with small children. Only few tracks are labelled as "black", that is "difficult".
3) We stopped at a motorway café for lunch and then we headed for Milan. My husband and I took turns at the wheel.
4) After dinner we usually accompany our child to the kids’ club and then we talk with other hotel guests in the hall.
5) When we go back into our room, my son is so tired that he falls asleep as soon as his head touches the pillow (can you say that in English?).
6) We often have to put him his pajamas on when he is already asleep.
He is both lazy and naughty and often throws a tantrum.
7) At first, we try not to indulge his whims (to comply with his wishes/ to indulge him in everything) but then we often have to give in to them.
Could you help me check these sentences, please? They refer to the same theme as yesterday's ones. (Can you say that?) LOL! I'd just say, " ... same theme as yesterday's."
1) We met my son’s ski instructor at the baby ski lift at two sharp.
These slopes are also often called "bunny slopes." http://www.google.com/search?rlz=1C2GGGE_enUS379US455&hl=en&site=&q=bunny+slope+skiing&oq=bunny+slope&aq=3&aqi=g6g-v4&aql=&gs_sm=c&gs_upl=4612l8442l0l11317l11l10l0l1l1l0l255l2013l0.2.7l9l0
2) Many ski slopes are not very steep and therefore suitable for families with small children. Only a few ski trails are labelled as "black", that is "difficult".
3) We stopped at a motorway café for lunch, and then we headed for Milan. My husband and I took turns at the wheel.
4) After dinner, we usually accompany our child to the kids’ club, and then we talk with other hotel guests in the hall.
5) When we go back into our room, my son is so tired that he falls asleep as soon as his head touches the pillow (can you say that in English?). Yes, and another way of saying it is this: "... as soon as his head hits the pillow."
6) We often have to put his pajamas on him when he is already asleep.
He is both lazy and naughty and often throws a tantrum.
7) At first, we try not to give in to his whims, but later, we often have to.
Sure! I can help you check these sentences. Here are my suggestions:
1) We met my son’s ski instructor at the baby ski lift at two sharp.
- This sentence looks good. It seems like you're trying to describe a meeting point with the ski instructor at the baby ski lift.
2) Most ski slopes are very simple and therefore suitable for families with small children. Only a few tracks are labeled as "black", meaning they are difficult.
- This sentence is well-written. It explains that most ski slopes are easy and suitable for families with small children, with only a few tracks being labeled as difficult.
3) We stopped at a motorway café for lunch, and then we headed for Milan. My husband and I took turns at the wheel.
- This sentence is clear. It describes a stop at a motorway café during a journey to Milan and how you and your husband took turns driving.
4) After dinner, we usually accompany our child to the kids' club and then chat with other hotel guests in the lobby.
- This sentence is good. It talks about your routine after dinner, where you take your child to the kids' club and then socialize with other hotel guests in the lobby.
5) When we go back to our room, my son is so tired that he falls asleep as soon as his head touches the pillow.
- This sentence is perfectly fine! It conveys the idea that your son is extremely tired and falls asleep quickly when you return to your room.
6) We often have to put him in his pajamas when he is already asleep. He is both lazy and naughty and often throws a tantrum.
- This sentence can be slightly improved. You can say "We often have to put his pajamas on while he is already asleep." To make it clearer that you're referring to your son. The rest of the sentence is good and describes his behavior.
7) At first, we try not to give in to his whims, but then we often have to give in to them.
- This sentence is fine. It explains that initially, you try not to comply with your son's every wish but eventually find yourselves giving in to his demands.
Overall, your sentences are well-constructed, and the only minor changes I suggested were for clarity or phrasing. Great job!