I urgently need you to revise this paragraph. Thank you very much in advance.
1) Dickens goes on to describe its residents. They look like one another and they are condemned to do the same monotonous work day after day with no possibility of escaping their soul-destroying routine.
2) The tedium of Coketown is emphasized by the fact that two totally opposite buildings, the jail and the infirmary, look the same.
3) The headmaster’s name, “M’ Choakumchild”, suggests that the school was a place of hatred which choked the children’s imagination and implied the use of corporal punishment.
4) Dickens refers to the school “as all fact” in his description. The children were like a product of fact, and this image links strongly with the theme of industrialization.
5) “Gradgrind” also provides the audience with information about his character, chapter "Bounderby”, a rich industrialist, is so named because he is by nature a bounder, a cheat, a deceiver who seeks advancement at the expense of others.
1. comma needed
2. OK
3. remove quotation marks from around the person's name
4. ... were like products of facts ...
5. There is a run-on here. Where should this be separated into two sentences?