Demonstrating Perseverance
I show perseverance when I study and work hard to raise my grade and never give up. My biggest goal is to make it to Yale University; I want to become an artist and a writer. I¡¦ll do whatever it takes to get accepted to that school. I always work hard¡K always! Ever since the beginning of the school year I said to myself ¡§I¡¦m going achieve and succeed in school!¡¨. My uncle says to me many time ¡§Don¡¦t give up, keep working hard and hard. If you work hard you¡¦ll make it to Yale. Don¡¦t give up!¡¨. At the award ceremony yesterday, I had gotten a lot of good awards (4). You know why? Because I work hard!!! I always study and study, that¡¦s how I made it to the Honor Roll for the 1st Quarter. I¡¦m going to earn more awards throughout the school year, next year and high school.
Since the semester is almost over I plan to do extra credit projects for all of my classes I¡¦m only doing this huge project to bring up my grades for all of my classes (except music). My plan was to ask all of my teachers¡¦ permission if it¡¦s ok to do extra credit, they all said yes! I was writing down some ideas I can do for extra credit to bring up my grade, it have to be the best! I thought of many good ideas and even my little brother help me with the Math.
Anyway, I have many ways to make it to Yale University. Yale wants a whole package; they want me to stand out! I planning on doing many things like going to tons of summer programs (academics) in order to get high school credits, school clubs relating to doing community service and things I¡¦m interest, after school programs (Kumon, Karate, etc.) and much more (it¡¦s a lot!). Yale is not the only college I want to go I also want to go to an art school but I have to find out first and decide.
Most kids in school just don¡¦t understand how school is important. They just slack off, fool around and are rude to others. By the time they are adults they¡¦ll regret. For me I take school very seriously (no joke)! That doesn¡¦t mean I won¡¦t have time for my friends and family I always have time for them!!! ƒº
Is my journal entry is good????
This is great!! :)
Thank You!!!! :)
So there is no grammar mistakes or this is just good to go????
Good job, Lauren!
Thank You!!!
I'm guesting there is no grammar mistakes. But I reread this again and there is a little mistake, I'm going to fix this.
Lots of my teachers love my writing, I'm a really good writer that's how I got a 99 average for english.
Thanks again!!! :)
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Overall, your journal entry demonstrates a strong sense of perseverance and determination. It's great to see that you have set your goals high and are willing to work hard to achieve them. The fact that you have already received several awards and made it to the Honor Roll shows that your efforts are paying off.
To improve your journal entry, you might consider adding more specific examples or anecdotes to showcase your perseverance. For example, you could mention specific challenges you faced or obstacles you overcame while studying or pursuing your artistic and writing goals. The more specific and detailed your examples are, the more impactful they will be in conveying your perseverance.
Additionally, you could also include some reflections on how your perseverance has positively impacted your personal growth and development. How has it transformed your work ethic, mindset, or attitude towards challenges? Sharing these insights will make your journal entry more meaningful and relatable.
Remember, when writing a journal entry, it's important to write in a way that feels authentic to you. Your entry should reflect your personal thoughts, feelings, and experiences. As long as you stay true to yourself and continue to work hard towards your goals, your journal entry will be a reflection of your journey and accomplishments.
Keep up the good work and continue to strive for excellence in your studies and passions!