Hi again :) how does this sentence look?
Through his accounts, he describes how the economic status of Jewish immigrants suffered greatly due to their race.
Hmmm. What do you mean by "look"?
Sorry ms.sue was helping me before, I mean is the sentence grammatically correct and basically does it sound good?
Your sentence is correct. However, the old question is whether Jews should be considered a race or religion. If the book emphasizes race, then you're right.
yep it focuses on race, social economic statuses and what not. thank you
You're welcome.
Hi! The sentence you provided looks good. It clearly conveys the idea that the speaker, through his accounts, is describing how the economic status of Jewish immigrants was negatively impacted because of their race. The sentence structure is clear and the meaning is easily understandable.
If you have any specific concerns about the sentence, or if you would like further suggestions or revisions, please let me know!