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I am seeking for some help in English (grammar and punctuation. Thanks!!!
Please review the folloing:

As you know, in the absence of timely copies of all bills and payments and medical records supporting the reasonableness and necessity of the services and bills, we will not be allowed to present evidence regarding these charges.
Our firm will continue to work hard to take care of medical care provider liens on behalf of our clients.

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    It looks fine.

    Sra

  • English -

    It's very wordy -- too many words used.
    http://grammar.ccc.commnet.edu/grammar/concise.htm
    It's always better to use fewer words so you don't lose your reader in all the convolutions.

    Because we don't have copies of all bills, payments, and medical records, we cannot present evidence for these services and bills.

    We will keep working hard to take care of these liens for our clients.

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