I left out a few sentences. Can you please check them?
1)England turned from an agricultural into an industrialized (not industrial) country.
2)The Indutrial Revolution caused an improvement in life (or in the living conditions).
3) The Luddites organized riots in order to achieve more rights and fairness in work.
4) Most (of the) factories were in the North and in the Midlands.
2. check the spelling; is it Industrial?
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