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Could you please check these sentences? Thank you.

1) Humanism spread in the whole country.
2) The English Renaissance developed (spread is possible?) later than its European equivalents.
3)Puritans wanted a balance of power between the king and (the?) Parliament.
4) Charles I's reign was troubled by (the?) clash with the Parliament.
5) They had short hair/they wore their hair short/they wore short hair/they cut their hair short. (which are not possible?)
6)Sleep gives us the greatest energy for life. Without sleep we will die.

  • English -

    1. OK

    2. "developed" is the correct term here.

    3. ... the king and Parliament.

    4. include "the"

    5. I wouldn't use "they wore short hair" - the others are fine.

    5. comma needed

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