I need help with my Juggling topic.I got 6/20 and I want to get the full 20 points! Thanks!Such as thesis, Introduction.
Thesis: The purpose of my speech is to inform my audience about my experience with juggling; more specifically how I became involved with juggling.
I have to break down my main points but I don't know other two to add as juggling experience. I have to have I, II & III...so far I have one which is "How I became involved with juggling."
Introduction: Have you ever indugled yourself in a hobby that captured your imagination, interests and kept you occupied? Well, I did. Juggling has been my passion, it provides me unique way to learn escape. Ever since, I was a little girl and lived in my native country; I loved juggling and juggled with different objects.
In there Introduction, I have to accomplish 3 purpose which are Motivation, Forecast and Orientation. Please, tell me how to include this in the intorduction..thanks!
How did your teacher score the 6/20? I can help you better if I know what he/she is looking for.
For example, I don't think you have written a true thesis statement, but without knowing what your teacher wants, I can't be sure.
Ok, thanks! First she said that I did not have good thesis statement. For instance, I have to have 3 main points which i'll be giving speech about in my thesis. In the thesis statement so far I only have one which is "how I became involved with juggling."
Thesis: The purpose of my speech is to inform my audience about my experience with juggling; more specifically how I became involved with juggling. This is how she wants to be written except she wants me to include othe two experiences i had with juggling.
For instance.
I. I'll be talking about "How I became invloved with juggling.
II & III. I don't kow what to talk about and she wants to know what will i'll for those two which I need help with. I, II & III had to be stated in the thesis but I only have I so far.
What are some of the experince with juggling I should talk about besides how became involved with juggling?
Also, She said, I got the conclusion right but I don't have the 3 purpose which are Motivation, Forecast and Orientation. Please, tell me how to include this in the intorduction..thanks! What are these please. So much questions but I really need help, thanks!
need help with my Juggling topic.I got 6/20 and I want to get the full 20 points! Thanks!Such as thesis, Introduction.
Thesis: The purpose of my speech is to inform my audience about my experience with juggling; more specifically how I became involved with juggling.
I have to break down my main points but I don't know other two to add as juggling experience. I have to have I, II & III...so far I have one which is "How I became involved with juggling."
Introduction: Have you ever indugled yourself in a hobby that captured your imagination, interests and kept you occupied? Well, I did. Juggling has been my passion, it provides me unique way to learn escape. Ever since, I was a little girl and lived in my native country; I loved juggling and juggled with different objects.
In there Introduction, I have to accomplish 3 purpose which are Motivation, Forecast and Orientation. Please, tell me how to include this in the intorduction..thanks!
English - Writeacher, Friday, December 2, 2011 at 1:23pm
How did your teacher score the 6/20? I can help you better if I know what he/she is looking for.
For example, I don't think you have written a true thesis statement, but without knowing what your teacher wants, I can't be sure.
English - Saahre, Friday, December 2, 2011 at 5:48pm
Ok, thanks! First she said that I did not have good thesis statement. For instance, I have to have 3 main points which i'll be giving speech about in my thesis. In the thesis statement so far I only have one which is "how I became involved with juggling."
Thesis: The purpose of my speech is to inform my audience about my experience with juggling; more specifically how I became involved with juggling. This is how she wants to be written except she wants me to include othe two experiences i had with juggling.
For instance.
I. I'll be talking about "How I became invloved with juggling.
II & III. I don't kow what to talk about and she wants to know what will i'll for those two which I need help with. I, II & III had to be stated in the thesis but I only have I so far.
What are some of the experince with juggling I should talk about besides how became involved with juggling?
Also, She said, I got the conclusion right but I don't have the 3 purpose which are Motivation, Forecast and Orientation. Please, tell me how to include this in the intorduction..thanks! What are these please. So much questions but I really need help, thanks!
To include motivation, forecast, and orientation in your introduction, you can make a few adjustments to your existing introduction. Here's an example of how you can incorporate these elements:
Introduction:
Have you ever indulged yourself in a hobby that not only captured your imagination, but also provided a unique way to escape and learn? For me, that hobby is juggling. Growing up in my native country, I was captivated by the art of juggling and spent countless hours perfecting my skills with various objects. Today, I stand before you to share my journey and experience with juggling.
Motivation:
Now, you might wonder what drew me to this seemingly unconventional hobby. It was more than just a way to pass time - juggling became my passion, fueling my curiosity and driving me to explore the limitless possibilities of this art form.
Forecast:
In the following speech, I will delve into three distinct aspects of my juggling experience. First, I will share with you how I became involved with juggling. Second, I will discuss the challenges I faced along the way and how they shaped my growth as a juggler. And finally, I will reveal the profound impact that juggling has had on my life, both personally and professionally.
Orientation:
Through my presentation, you will not only gain a deep understanding of my personal journey, but also become acquainted with the art of juggling itself. Moreover, you may even feel inspired to embark on your own juggling adventure, discovering the joy and satisfaction that comes from mastering this unique skill.
By incorporating these elements into your introduction, you will effectively motivate your audience, provide them with a forecast of what's to come, and orient them towards the purpose of your speech.