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Hi does the following sentence sound alright, or should I replace "and it" with the word which?

It was filled with lies, corruption, betrayal and it kept me at the edge of my seat.

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    This is how I would word it:

    It was filled with lies, corruption, and betrayal keeping me at the edge of my seat.

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    Alright thanks!

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    You're welcome.

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    ... it's fine ... if you put a comma after "betrayal"

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