Is their anything else I can add to my conclusion.
Please check my artist statement. I know I show it to you but i did some changes again and i would like for you guys to check it.
writing statemrnt:
The reason why my essay "Vive la difference!" relates to this year PTA Reflection theme "Diversity Means.." is because my school is marvelous and a terrific program. In addition, my school does lot of things in their diversity and since I know how my school do a lot of things in their diversity, I knew writing an essay about it will look great relating it to the theme.
Mission Statement
”.... embraces teaching and learning to raise academic achievement for all students, and to develop citizens who respect diversity."
Art wk statement:
The reason why my photographic collage relates to this year PTA Reflection theme "Diversity Mean.." is because these pictures I found in the internet are Multicultural pictures and it really relates to the theme. Diversity also have something to do with Multicultural. Culture Diversity is the variety of human societies or cultures in a specific region, or in the world as a whole.
the mission statement is part of my writing statement
Please proofread your statement. There are several errors I think you can find.
The reason why my photographic collage relates to this year PTA Reflection theme "Diversity Mean.." is because these pictures I found in the internet are Multicultural, School/Community pictures. Diversity also have something to do with Multicultural. The main thing about Diversity is Multicultural and our School and Community.
The reason why my essay "Vive la difference!" relates to this year PTA Reflection theme "Diversity Means.." is because my school is a marvelous and a terrific program. As I was learning about my school, I realize there are a lot of things we do in our diversity and we always will continue to consistently celebrate our diversity. My school done a lot of activities in our diversity.
Mission Statement
”Chestnut Ridge Middle School embraces teaching and learning to raise academic achievement for all students, and to develop citizens who respect diversity."
is their anything else I should add to my conclusion for my essay
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is there anything else i could add to my conclusion for my essay i want to write 2 more sentences.
I can't think of anything else -- but go for it! :-)
Ok I leave it but thank you for helping me Ms. Sue and Sra.
Bye!!!
Good Night !!!
You're welcome, Laruen. Good night.
To improve your conclusion and artist statement, you can consider the following:
1. In your essay conclusion, it would be helpful to summarize the main points you addressed in your essay. This will give your readers a clear understanding of the content you covered and reinforce the connection between your school's diversity and the theme of "Diversity Means.."
2. For your artist statement, you can elaborate on how your photographic collage represents diversity and multiculturalism. Instead of simply mentioning that the pictures are multicultural, explain how they showcase different cultures, traditions, or perspectives. This can include discussing the specific elements you used to create the collage and how they contribute to expressing diversity.
3. In both statements, it would be beneficial to include personal experiences or observations to support your claims. For example, you can mention specific events or instances where you witnessed diversity in your school or explain how you personally connect with the theme of diversity. This will make your statements more authentic and persuasive.
4. Use concrete examples or anecdotes to demonstrate the impact of diversity in your school or in the images you chose. Instead of simply stating that your school does a lot of things in terms of diversity, provide specific examples or stories that highlight these efforts or their positive outcomes. Similarly, explain why the multicultural pictures you selected are significant and how they reflect diverse cultures or perspectives.
Remember, the key to a successful conclusion and artist statement is to provide clear explanations, personal insights, and specific examples that support your claims.