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Public schools vs. Private schools

Private and public schools education differs in many ways, there are many difference of both types of schools such as their academic reputation, class sizes and admissions requirements.
Student’s performance in public and private schools differ a lot. Private schools often have better grades and test scores; it has smaller class sizes and a lower student to teacher ratio. It allows students to have more individualized attention and opportunities for access to instructors. However, public school students have larger class sizes and more students. So, students would have less individualized attention. Another aspect of private schools superiority is they offer specialized classes and courses beyond the basics. While, public schools only teach general and common studies that would be required for future life. Another big difference is that public schools are required to educate all children by law and can't deny any student. Admitting all sorts of children into classrooms leads to disturbance causing higher chances of bullying, distractions and violence. Unlike public school, private schools have different admissions requirements. Private schools accept students according to its academic standards but generally private school students meet or exceed the standards of public school students.

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  • Please proofread my essay and make corrections -

    Please proofread for run on sentences, subject-verb agreement, possessive punctuation, and pronoun-antecedent agreement.

    What connection do you see between the selective enrollment of private schools and their higher standards?

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    Public schools vs. Private schools
    Private and public schools education differs in many ways, there are many differences of both types of schools such as their academic programs, class sizes and admissions requirements that makes a private school better than a public school. Student’s performance in public and private schools differ a lot. Private schools often have better grades and test scores. They have smaller class sizes and a lower student to teacher ratio. It allows students to have the instructor’s individualized attention and access to the student. However, public school students have larger class sizes and more students. So therefore, students would have less individualized attention. Another aspect of private schools superiority is they offer specialized classes and courses beyond the basics. While, public schools only teach general or common studies that would be required for future life. Admission enrolment requirement is another big difference. Public schools are required to educate all children by law and can't deny any student. Admitting all sorts of children into classrooms often leads to disturbance causing higher chances of bullying, distractions and violence. Unlike public schools, private schools have different admissions requirements. Private schools accept students according to its academic standards but generally private school students meet or exceed the standards of public school students.

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    Private and public schools education differs in many ways, there are many differences of both types of schools such as their academic programs, class sizes and admissions requirements that makes a private school better than a public school.
    Run-on sentence
    schools'
    among (not of)


    Student’s performance in public and private schools differ a lot.
    students'

    It allows students to have the instructor’s individualized attention and access to the student.
    They allow
    instructors'
    "access to the student?


    Please reread the rest of your essay in order to catch these simple errors.

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