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for my homework we had to write a paragraph on what we do to help out around the house
could you please let me know if there are grammar or spelling mistakes and tell me where i made mistakes and what i should have said instead




Pour aider autour de la maison je décharge le lave-vaisselle quand il doit être fait et j'aide aussi aider à charger le lave-vaisselle.
Pour aider à la maison j'ai aussi nettoyer votre chambre. Cela comprend faire mon lit et de garder ma chambre en ordre, même si je le faire quand même. Je garde aussi ma salle de bain bien rangé en faisant en sorte que tous mes maquillage et produits pour les cheveux sont mis de côté et rien n'est laissé de côté. Je préfère garder ma chambre et salon de bain impeccable parce que j'ai le désordre compulsif obsessif la haine pagaille.
Pour aider à la maison j'ai aussi mettre la table pour le dîner et aussi ranger la table à l'écart après le dîner c'est parce que mes parents dépensent une cuisson longue donc, mon frère et moi, comme pour aider
Pour aider à la maison j'ai aussi faire la vaisselle. Nous utilisons normalement le lave-vaisselle, je vais laver la vaisselle si je cuire un gâteau ou de faire toute la cuisson ou parfois laver quelques assiettes impairs qui ont besoin de faire.

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    aussi aider à = delete the "aider" = j'aide aussi à, etc.

    I corrected this before. You are using Present tense and I doubt you wish to say "I clean YOUR room?" = ...je nettoie ma chambre = I clean my room

    même si je le faire = if I have just done it? = si je viens de le faire

    Did you not see my earlier corrections? Here's another one I already did = la salle is feminine so rangée must also be feminine

    And I did this one as well (I HATE repeating what I've already done) = tous mes maquillage tous is plural, mes is plural so maquillage must ALSO be plural

    impeccable must ALSO be plural because you have a compound subject (already mentioned earlier)

    j'ai le désordre compulsif obsessif la haine pagaille. = BOTH désorder and pagaille mean "disorder" and what is hate doing in there? (SAME question earlier)

    OKAY. I'm stopping right here. Please make all the corrections on the OTHER post because I see exactly the same thing as the first post.

    Sra (aka Mme)

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    Here's yesterday's:

    http://www.jiskha.com/display.cgi?id=1320859641

    Sra (aka Mme)

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    sorry i did not see the one that you have already corrected so i reuploaded it


    thank you for correcting it

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