Could you please check these other sentences I left out?
(The first refers to my previous post). Thank you.
1) This is a nonsense. She admits being guilty but then she says she would be ashamed of having a coward's heart (by not admitting her guilt?)
2)Lady Macbeth tells her husband to react firmly; she invites him to have his hands washed and then bring the daggers back.
3)Better: she invites him to wash his hands and then take the daggers back to the King's room.
4) to wash his hands clean/to wash off the blood; to wash the blood off his hands. Are they all possible?
5) She even says that he must smear the grooms’ faces with blood so that they will be the ones accused of the murder (so that the blame will be put on them/so that they will be accused of the murder in their own place?? Are they possible?)
4) yes
all in parentheses are possible.
Sra
Sure! I'd be happy to check these sentences for you and provide feedback.
1) This sentence seems to convey confusion or contradiction in Lady Macbeth's words and actions. However, it could be rephrased to make it clearer. For example: "It is contradictory that she admits to being guilty but also claims she would be ashamed of having a coward's heart. Does this mean she is not fully accepting responsibility?"
2) This sentence accurately states that Lady Macbeth urges her husband to react firmly and encourages him to wash his hands and return the daggers.
3) This revised sentence provides a clearer explanation of the actions Lady Macbeth advises her husband to take. It mentions washing hands and then taking the daggers back to the King's room.
4) All the options you provided are possible: "to wash his hands clean," "to wash off the blood," and "to wash the blood off his hands." They essentially convey the same meaning.
5) This sentence accurately describes Lady Macbeth's plan for shifting the blame onto the grooms. Both options you presented are possible: "so that the blame will be put on them" and "so that they will be accused of the murder in their own place." They both convey the idea that Lady Macbeth wants the grooms to be falsely accused instead of her husband.
Overall, your sentences are quite clear, and the revisions you suggested improve their clarity. Great job!