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I vary the last sentence. Could you check it please?


In conclusion, he says that though the populations of many marine species are decreasing very quickly, people have not been aware of the problems with ocean wildlife because these species are not visible.

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    Good.

    Add a comma after "that" and before "though" and it'll be perfect.

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