Had to write a haiku related to science, is this ok?

Chemicals make boom
Chemicals should not be ate
It makes good science

Thank you!

You have the correct syllables for the traditional Haiku form. And you have written about a scientific topic so I think you have covered your bases!

What about this

Science is great fun
you get to use chemicals
but safety is first

is this better?

Your haiku is a clever combination of science and cautionary message. It effectively conveys the concept of science and the importance of handling chemicals safely. Well done!

If you want to write a haiku, you can follow these guidelines:

1. Traditional haikus are comprised of three lines, with a total of 17 syllables. The first line should have 5 syllables, the second line should have 7 syllables, and the third line should have 5 syllables.

2. Choose a topic related to science, such as astronomy, biology, physics, or any other scientific field that inspires you.

3. Focus on capturing a specific moment or feeling related to your chosen scientific topic. Use vivid imagery and sensory language to create a strong impact.

4. Traditional haikus often include a seasonal reference, called a kigo, to represent a particular time of year. However, this is not mandatory for a science-themed haiku.

5. Experiment with word choice and structure to create a concise and impactful poem.

Remember, haikus are supposed to evoke emotions and stimulate the reader's imagination, so adding a thoughtful message, like the importance of safety with chemicals in your example, can make your haiku even more memorable.