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I'm telllling you Marge if Carol has another party this month i will have to buy a new dress anda new pair of shoes the kind I can also wear for other occasions. WHen i saw her last night she said she was too tired for another social event another evening of talk talk talk and all that stuff. She is i've heard starting a new job and that has to be a reason for her to slow down a bit don't you think?

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    Thank you!

    I'm telling your Marge, if Carol has another party this month I will have to buy a new dress and a new pair of shoes, the kind i can also wear for other occasions. When i saw her last night she said she was too tired for another social even, another evening of talk, talk, talk and all that stuff. She is, i've heard, starting a new job and that has to be a reason for her to slow down a bit, don't you think?

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    month,
    night,
    job,

    The rest of your commas are correct.

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    Thank you!

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    You're welcome.

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