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49. To succeed in the new economy, workers will have to learn throughout their careers, adapt to changing circumstances, and have self-motivation.

  • Comm 215 -

    The original:(make parallel)
    To succeed in the new economy, workers will have to learn throughout their careers, adapt to changing circumstances, and self-motivation will be needed.

  • Comm 215 -

    Your corrected sentence is parallel, but the last part of the series is a bit awkward. All parts of the series need to follow "will have to" smoothly.

    ... will have to learn throughout their careers, adapt to changing circumstances, and be self-motivated.

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