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can u give me guidelines to solve this exercise or tell me if they are right please?
Avoid discriminatory language: change these sentences to avoid discriminatory language.
1. any worker who ignores this rule will have his salary reduced.
my answer:
The employee who ignores this rule will have salary reduced.
2. the typical postman rarely makes mistakes in delivering his mail.
my answer:
The mail carrier rarely makes mistakes in delivering the mail.
Are they right?

  • business English -

    1. any worker who ignores this rule will have his salary reduced.
    my answer:
    The employee who ignores this rule will have salary reduced.
    awkward; better to make the subject "employees" and revise from there.

    2. the typical postman rarely makes mistakes in delivering his mail.
    my answer:
    The mail carrier rarely makes mistakes in delivering the mail.
    good!

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