Hi I'm writing an essay about No-No Boy. Does the following sentence sound alright, if not how do I make it sound better. I need help soon please!
Two significant problems in this novel for him is overcoming self blame along with dealing with culturally assimilating himself to America.
I think it sounds great...:))) Keep up the good work!!
Just a minute: two things IS? Two significant problems in this novel for him ARE, etc.
Sra
The sentence could be improved for clarity and flow. Here is a revised version:
"In the novel No-No Boy, the protagonist faces two significant challenges: overcoming self-blame and navigating the process of cultural assimilation into America."
This revision maintains the original meaning while providing a clearer structure and smoother transitions between the two problems the character faces.