english grammar. please help me
posted by jessie .
please help me to correct my resignation letter in correct format and grammar. thank you
I would like to inform you that I am resigning from my job effective on Oct.28, 2011 and it is extremely urgent I request to leave on Oct.30, 2011. So I hope you will consider looking into my financial benefits since I was employed here up to the last day of my stay in your company.
My parents requested me to stay put in Philippines because of the business commitments which I am about to manage since both of them are getting old, and they want me to take responsibility of the family owned business.
Meanwhile, it has been a pleasure working with techno-blue Company and staff for more than 2 years, which gained me a valuable experience and hopefully can be helpful to me for my future undertakings.
It would be my final decision as I also need a complete treatment for my continuous health problem.
More power and continuous success in your business.
You're including too much information in what you've written above. The second paragraph is unnecessary.
Take a look at the model here, and then click on the other examples under More Resignation Letters to see slight variations.
Re-post when you have rewritten your letter.