Dear Mrs. Gebbia,
Hi! You may not know me but my name is Laruen Jean-Baptiste. I’m currently in the 7th grade & it will be an honor for me to join the school’s newspaper this year. I love writing a lot, it’s part of my life. When I join the school’s newspaper I have some wonderful ideas that you will love & that will make the school’s newspaper the best this school year. I’m a very creative person with very creative ideas. See you at our first club meeting.
Sincerely,
Laruen Jean-Baptiste
So do you like it?
Is it perfect to give it to her?
=if it need some editing can you give the real copy of it new
Oh I mads a mistake i'm in the 12 grade i'm a 12th grade i was thinking about 7th grade sorry about that
This is a good 7th grade letter. It is a terrible 12th grade letter.
When you were inquiring about Harvard, you said you were in 7th grade.
Oh sorry
so it's the letter good
Lauren the letter is not proper if your in the 12th grade.
This is a good example to start your letter and i believe a much more better way...
Dear Mrs. Gebbia,
My name is Lauren Jean-Baptiste, I'm writing to you today because I'm interested in joining the schools newspaper this year. Writing for me is and will always be part of my life. blah blah blah........
If you are going to sign your name at the end of the letter, why are you stating your name in the first sentence?
And ... don't start a letter with "Hi!" - it's very juvenile.
I'm in the 7th grade
the only reason why i lied cause people don't really to know about me that much
never mind i got this take care of.