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when describing a deserted place how can you use onomatopoeia to biuld up the tension and make it fun for the reader? please give some examples

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    Creaking door hinge
    Whispering winds
    Hum of bees

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    i am trying to create a sense of emptiness in the deserted house and i am walking up the flight of staires so how can i use onomatopoeia?

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    echoing footfalls
    deafening silence

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