I'm posting you the ones I found most difficult to check. Thank you.
1)I hate doing shopping (“the shopping”?). I attended the primary and middle schools in Italy. I’ve got a pimply face with a pimply nose and a normal (?) mouth.
2) I’ve got small brown eyes like a Chinese with brown eyebrows. I do some football (better I play football).
3) I like reading war and car books (better: war books and car magazines) and collecting model cars.
4) I dress normal. Better: I wear casual/plain clothes. I live in the country. In the front of my house there is a courtyard with many flowers and trees. I have 4 goldfish.
4) I dress normally. (The Adverb answers "how do you dress?" rather than the adjective.
The rest is AOK.
Sra
1) It seems you're looking for feedback on your sentences. Here's my analysis:
- In the first sentence, "I hate doing shopping" can be rephrased to "I hate shopping." Both are correct, but "shopping" is more commonly used without the article "the."
- The phrase "primary and middle schools" is fine, as it indicates that you attended multiple schools.
- Regarding your description of your physical features, you mentioned having a "pimply face with a pimply nose." Since repetition isn't necessary, you can simply say "I have a pimply face and nose." As for your mouth, you mentioned it is "normal," which is a fine way to describe it but could be further clarified as "average" or "typical."
2) In this sentence, you mentioned having small brown eyes and brown eyebrows, comparing them to those of a Chinese person. To improve the sentence's clarity, you can rephrase it as "I have small brown eyes and brown eyebrows, similar to those of a Chinese person." Additionally, you mentioned that you "do" football. The more common phrasing would be "I play football."
3) For the sentence about your hobbies, you mentioned enjoying reading war and car books. To make it clearer, you can say "I like reading books about war and cars." As for collecting model cars, that part is clear.
4) In the last sentence, you mentioned dressing "normal," but it would be more precise to say "I dress in casual/plain clothes." Additionally, you mentioned living in the country, and having a courtyard with flowers and trees in front of your house. The description of the courtyard is clear. However, you included the detail about having 4 goldfish, which is fine unless it's significant to the overall context.
To review, here are the suggested revisions:
1) I hate shopping. I attended primary and middle schools in Italy. I have a pimply face and nose, with a normal mouth.
2) I have small brown eyes and brown eyebrows, similar to those of a Chinese person. I play football.
3) I like reading books about war and cars, and collecting model cars.
4) I dress in casual/plain clothes. I live in the country, and in front of my house, there is a courtyard with many flowers and trees. I also have 4 goldfish.