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i don't know how tomake this sentence advanced.. can you please help me!!! thanks. in my essay i was talking about a poem, and how the boat mentioned in it could symbolize the tranportaion of the dead to heaven. in this following line im trying to say, that because of this quote, its sure that the author is taling about seath and eternal life. but i cant put it in words.
here is the sentence

Given that death is experienced alone the next line, “one clear call for me”, endorses that the poet was depicting the scene of passing away and entering heaven.

again thank you!!!

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    change "endorses" to "suggests". One can never be certain about symbols, we all see things differently.

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