english

posted by .

can you please help me correct these sentances so it sounds better.

During sunset the sun falls and an evening star progressively emerges. To the poet, this event may symbolize the rising of the dead from earth and entering of the soul to heaven.

i want make this entence more advanced... but i don't know how...

please help me THANKYOU!

  • english -

    At sunset, the sun falls and an evening star progressively emerges. To the poet, this event may symbolize the dead rising from earth and the soul entering heaven.

    Sra

Respond to this Question

First Name
School Subject
Your Answer

Similar Questions

  1. english

    could you please correct it, and help me write it in a better manner. From the sunset phrase the readers anticipated that the boat was in fact the transportation to heaven, and that the passengers were all from the dead. Moreover, …
  2. english

    can you please help me correct these two sentnces, and make them sound better. thanks!!! From the sunset phrase the readers anticipated that the boat was in fact the transportation to heaven, and that the passengers were all from the …
  3. Science

    Facts about the sun are? I have 1. the only star in our solar system 2. sun spots are cooler areas on sun's surface 3. from solar energy 4.Solar flares 5. only star you see during the day 6.made of gas 7.closest star to our earth
  4. Science

    Express mass of the Earth in unit of M. Take ME = 6 x 1024kg. The apparent magnitude of the sun is £¡ 26.81 and that of another star is£¡1.81. How much brighter the sun is with respect to that star ?
  5. English

    The star is much brighter than the sun. ----------------------- Is 'the star' in generic use in this sentence?
  6. Science please help :)?

    3. which if the following factors determines how long a star will live ?
  7. Language

    On sweet plum blossoms The sun rises suddenly. Look a mountain path! Has spring come indeed?
  8. english

    :Select the correct excerpt. Which excerpt from Robert Stawell Ball's Great Astronomers is best supported by this diagram?
  9. ap physics

    A star the size of our Sun runs out of nuclear fuel and, without losing mass, collapses to a white dwarf star the size of our Earth. The radius of our Sun is 6.96×108m , the radius of Earth is 6.37×106m . If the star initially rotates …
  10. physics

    A star the size of our Sun runs out of nuclear fuel and, without losing mass, collapses to a white dwarf star the size of our Earth. The radius of our Sun is 6.96×108m , the radius of Earth is 6.37×106m If the star initially rotates …

More Similar Questions