is anyone can help to correct my english..thank you....please correct if it relevant to the question of my exination..thanks and GOD BLESS U.
question..1.What is meant by “if we are to improve our speaking skills, we must first become more aware of ourselves, our motivation, behavior patterns, and likely our mistakes” Kindly rationalize your thoughts through your personal experience.
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improving speaking skills is evebody's doubt but, its also desire to covey message to every one fluently and smoothly.IN MY experience I spoke on the front of the huge audience but at first i was really nervous or reluctant to express in fron of them that i might be wrong or giving incorrect information to them.i know audience expecting more about me on what i can do or to learn themselves.after the meeting I remember and realized that something got wrong on my message to them and I also knew it and noticed through their reaction.I continued to speak in front of them and just think that nothing has happened on what I said.I always think positive that I am always right what I am doing in speaking but later I have to accept what has wrong I MADE AND IT'S JUST A PART OF EVERYONE'S LIFE AND ITS THE REASON TO START MYSELF AWARE AND CAREFULLY THOUGHT IF SOMETHING NEEDED TO START IN SPECIALLY IN SPEAKING.MISTAKES IS MOTIVATING MYSELF TO PURSUE BECOMING GOOD ENOUGHT
TO HAVE A GOOD SKILLS IN SPEAKING.THE AUDIENCE COMMENTS ALSO IS GIVING MYSELF MORE COMFORTABLE THAT SOMETHING HAS NOTICED ON ME AND THAT IS I have to give more attentin in improving more.I should have been more understanding and accepting all what I have dome wrong in my speaking in order that I can make good enough n correcting and it will make me more aware before starting to speak so I can creat good words and speak well and deliver almost perfect message to the audience.
First of all, every sentence needs to begin with a capital letter and end with a period or question mark.
Second, you need to make sure that you are not separating sentences with commas. Commas are not enough. A sentence must end with a period or a question mark.
Third, there should be no use of all-capitals.
Once you have gone through all this and taken care of those three items above, please re-post.
Certainly! Here is a corrected version of your answer:
Improving speaking skills is a common goal for everyone, as it allows us to convey messages fluently and smoothly. In my personal experience, I have had the opportunity to speak in front of a large audience. However, at first, I was extremely nervous and hesitant to express myself, fearing that I might provide incorrect or inaccurate information. I was aware that the audience had expectations from me, both in terms of what I could teach them and what they could learn themselves.
After the meeting, I reflected on my performance and noticed that there were some mistakes in my message, which I had already sensed through the audience's reactions. Nevertheless, I continued to speak, believing that it was important to maintain a positive mindset and have confidence in myself. However, I soon realized that it was crucial to accept my mistakes as a natural part of everyone's learning journey. These mistakes motivated me to better myself and become proficient in speaking.
The comments and feedback from the audience provided me with valuable insights and comforted me in knowing that my shortcomings had been noticed. This led me to focus more on improvement. I also understood the importance of being self-aware and carefully considering my thoughts before speaking, ensuring that I choose the right words and effectively deliver my message.
It is essential to be understanding and accepting of our mistakes, as this allows us to learn and grow. By acknowledging our weaknesses in speaking, we can work towards correcting them, thus becoming more aware and proficient in delivering a near-perfect message to any audience.
Please note that while I have made corrections to the grammar and syntax, it is important to also review the content of your answer to ensure it is relevant to the question and aligns with your personal experience.