A survivor from the Holocaust could

can u lease tell me what is can do to make this better. Please correct me if I'm wrong anywhere.

say that there is god because he/she had faith and lived through the horrible conditions. Another survivor from the same camp as the first can have a notion completely the opposite because he/she lost all their family members during the Holocaust. Thus, individuals who experience the same obstacle don’t necessarily have the same point of view.

Begin the sentence with a capital = Say and be sure to capitalize God

he/she lost all his/her family

The rest is OK.

Sra