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Instructions: revise to remove fragnments and/or parallelism errors.

?1. I like basebal because it is fun and teaches me about the sport.

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    Circular thinking here = "I like baseball because it [baseball] ... teaches me about [baseball]."


    I see no parallel construction problems nor any fragment, but I do see that error in thinking.

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    I like baseball, I can learn about the sport and it is also fun.

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