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English 101AYR has now been in session for four weeks. In at least one full screen (one paragraph rather than an essay), answer the following question: Has your opinion about hybrid courses changed from day one to today? If yes, in what ways has it changed? If no, why has it not changed. Explain your opinion in essay format (state the topic and your opinion in the first sentence of your paragraph; then support your first sentence with your details and examples). Also, check each sentence for correct sentence structure especially when combining ideas into one long sentence. Keep in mind to only combine 2 simple sentences [subject + verb + completer (any words after the verb to complete the idea)].
After posting your paragraph, reply to one person's posting. Agree or disagree with the person's posting. Be sure to explain why you agree or disagree.


no i expect that hybrid courses are fast paced. but i feel the course is rushed because it is summer semester. the grammar online exercises really help me alot in improving my writing skills. after 5 weeks, i still have many mistakes on my writing . i really improve my writing, i learned how to use commas write and writing a good introduction. im glad that i tool this course because it really help me to improve my writing in just a short time.

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    If this is the paragraph you intend to submit, check capitalization, punctuation especially.

    No, my opinion about hybrid courses has not changed from day one. (When you answer the question, keep in mind that the reader only sees your answer and doesn't know what the question refers to.)

    I expect hybrid courses are fast paced, but I feel the course is rushed because it is summer semester.
    The online grammar exercises really help (present or past tense?) me a lot in improving my writing skills. After five weeks, I still have many mistakes in my writing but I really improved using commas and writing a good introduction.

    (It was suggested using complex sentences by combining 2 simple sentences, so it's a good idea to do that to show you have understood and learned.)

    I'm glad I took this course, because it really helped me to improve my writing in just a short time.

    (Past tense is far better because now you have finished the course?)

    Sra

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    Noob -- when I read your essay, I thought you were not serious. How can you claim to have learned anything about grammar when you didn't use punctuation or capitalization?

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    It was suggested using complex sentences by combining 2 simple sentences, so it's a good idea to do that to show you have understood and learned.)

    what do you mean by this?

    no the class is not finish yet, this is only for midterm

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    to mis sue

    i have a bad teacher. i learned just a little. i want to put what i really want to say but no because i will fail :)

  • help me to construct this in a good essay -

    No matter how bad your teacher is, you can still use appropriate capitalization and punctuation!

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    This is an example of a complex sentence, made by combining 2 simple sentences.

    simple sentence = After 5 weeks I still have many mistakes in my writing.

    simple sentence = I really improved (past tense) my writing...... (This sentence was longer so I left out some of the words.

    complex sentence = After 5 weeks I still have many mistakes in my writing BUT I really improved, etc.

    See the connecting word BUT? There are other words you can use to connect 2 simple sentences: Here's a website with a good list:

    https://www.dlsweb.rmit.edu.au/lsu/content/4_WritingSkills/writing_tuts/sentences_LL/subordinators.html

    Sra

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    ok here's the final product that im going to post. critique please


    No, my opinion about hybrid courses has not changed from day one. I already expected hybrid courses are fast pace, but I feel the course is rushed because it is summer semester. The online grammar exercises really helped me a lot in improving my writing skills. After five weeks, I still have many mistakes on my grammar and punctuation but that can't be learned in just 5 weeks. Also,I noticed that i improved on writing a good introduction and learned how to support topic sentence in detailed manner. I'm glad I took this course, because it really helped me to improve my writing in just a short time.

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    No, my opinion about hybrid courses has not changed from day one. I already expected hybrid courses are fast paced, but I feel the course is rushed because it is summer semester. The online grammar exercises really helped me a lot in improving my writing skills. After five weeks, I still have many mistakes in my grammar and punctuation<~~add comma but that can't be learned in just 5 weeks. Also,I noticed that i<~~?? improved in writing a good introduction and learned how to support a topic sentence in a detailed manner. I'm glad I took this course,<~~delete comma because it really helped me to improve my writing in just a short time.

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    thanks writeteacher

    what do you think of the idea? is it vague?

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    No, I think it's fine. You are pointing out the positives and the negatives, and there's nothing wrong with that.

    =)

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