Can someone help me with this answer check if its right ok the question says After Reading discuss what you think people can learn from those who are dying? So i put
Well people can learn a lot from kids that are dying. The kids can sense of their sight, hearing, smell, taste, or touch kind of like the imagery to their death. They have all wisdoms in the world they can teach you all about life if you can listen to them. For example in this story Alain could describe the pain and agene that they feel they could show you thing you never knew about your welds you can learn a lot about dying people or kids of any kind.
this for the story unfinished business by elisabeth kubler-ross.
Well people can learn a lot from kids that are dying.
Omit "well." Use "who" not "that."
The kids can sense of their sight, hearing, smell, taste, or touch kind of like the imagery to their death.
I don't understand what you mean.
They have all wisdoms in the world they can teach you all about life if you can listen to them.
"Wisdom" should be singular. This is a run-on sentence.
Please make these corrections, carefully proofread the rest of your paragraph, and repost.
People can learn lots of things from kids that are dying. The kids can show you sight, hearing, smell, taste, or touch to their death. They would show you all wisdoms in the world, and can teach you all about life if you can listen to them. For example in this story Alain could describe the pain and agene that they feel they could show you thing you never knew about your welds you can learn a lot about dying people or kids of any kind.
Please re-read Ms. Sue's corrections and instructions. You didn't make all the corrections she indicated, nor did you make that 2nd sentence any clearer.
Please re-do.
Your answer touches on some important points, but it could be refined to provide a more focused response to the question. Here's a revised version:
When considering what people can learn from those who are dying, there are several valuable lessons to be gained. One can learn about the fragility of life, the importance of cherishing moments, and the true priorities in life. Additionally, individuals facing the end of their lives often possess a unique wisdom and perspective that can enlighten others. By listening and engaging in meaningful conversations, one can learn about the richness of life experiences, the resilience of the human spirit, and the importance of finding joy in even the simplest of things. Stories like the one about Alain mentioned in your response can provide insights into the pain, strength, and nuances of dying experiences. So, it is indeed possible to learn a great deal from people, including children, who are facing the end of their lives.