English

posted by .

I'd like you to check these few sentences for me. Thank you very much.

1) I'd hate to lose (and not losing) my ring because it was my grandmother's.
2) I use the internet to do school research and to look up information I need for school.
3) I'm a Tim subscriber. I subscribed Tim last year. I don't have to top up my cell phone myself since it tops up (I don't know if this verb is possible) automatically.
4) I recharge it every two days.
I like listening to music on earphones when I'm jogging.
5) Can you say: I said to John that I was going away.
Or it is better: I told John that I was going away.

  • English -

    1. Sentence is fine, and "to lose" is correct, yes.

    2. OK

    3. I'm not sure what "Tim" is, and I'm semi-unsure of what "tops up" means. But the only addition I'd make is the word "to" in front of "Tim" in the second sentence.

    4. OK

    5. You can say it either way, but the second phrasing is better -- simpler.

Respond to this Question

First Name
School Subject
Your Answer

Similar Questions

  1. English

    Can you please check these sentences. Thank you very much for all! 1) What is your school day like?
  2. English

    1)Animals have the same right to life as humans. Animal testing means to cancel the right to life of animals 2)I use the internet for school research/for homowork/for doing/to do my homework or some school research/to cheat at school/to …
  3. English

    Can you check these sentences, please? 1)If you want to reduce this problem (a synonym for reduce?
  4. English

    I urgently need to know if everything is correct. Thank you very much for your help! 1)I use the computer three hours a week on average. I usually use it to play computer games, surf the net or do some school research. 2) I sometimes …
  5. English

    Could you pleae check these paragraphs I prepared on various listening comprehensions. Thank you very much. 1) Lucy is joining the tennis club. So she needs to buy the tennis equipment. She will be able to use Miranda's box of balls, …
  6. English

    I left out this last sentence I would really like you to check. Thank you 1) I use the net to do (carry out) school research, look up information I need for school, keep up to date on what happens in the world and finally, to chat …
  7. English

    Here are some sentences on the same theme I'd like you to check. I included a few sentences on reading habits and a few words I don't know if they exist. 1) Is the verb "punch" correct in the sentence: Punch your ticket (check), then …
  8. English

    Can someone check if this question is grammatically correct?
  9. English

    Can someone check my post? It's urgent. Thank you very much in advance! I like the urban look the most/the worst because it is so cool. These clothes are baggy and comfortable enough to wear anywhere/for work/for school/at parties/to
  10. English

    Hello. I would be very grateful if you helped me with a few sentences. 1) Which part of the book did you like the most?

More Similar Questions