posted by diana

is this senetence put right? or how do i fix it?

Commas are very important to add to a sentence where they are needed because if you don't properly use them, the reader will be confused.

  1. Writeacher

    It's very awkwardly phrased. Try this:

    It's very important to put commas in a sentence where they are needed so readers are not confused.

  2. Ms. Sue

    You need a comma after needed.

  3. diana

    how about

    John went to the store, then called Kristy.

  4. Ms. Sue

    That's a run-on sentence. How do you think you can fix it?

  5. diana

    john went to the store, then when he got home, he called Kristy.

  6. Ms. Sue


    John went to the store, and then called Kristy.

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