Thesis for Research paper

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Is this a good thesis for my research paper.

Although gays are deprived of same-sex marriage, they are stripped of their respect,equal rights and financial security; therefore, the Federal government must pass a law allowing same-sex marriages

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    It seems as if you need a different word from "Although" -- it doesn't make sense as it is.

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    Thank you I will continue to work on thesis post my results later

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    Although gays are equal members of society, they are stripped of their respect,equal rights and financial security; therefore, the Federal government must pass a law allowing same-sex marriages

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    I have made changes to my thesis as follows:
    Although gays are equal members of society, they are stripped of their respect,equal rights and financial security; therefore, the Federal government must pass a law allowing same-sex marriages

    thank you in advance for your assistance

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    Guess no one agrees since no comment has been added

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