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Choose the sentence that is written and punctuated correctly.

1. She reported that her boss's secretary called 9-1-1 when she fainted, she has no recollection of the ambulance arriving.

2. She reported that her boss's secretary called 9-1-1 when she fainted; therefore she has no recollection of the ambulance arriving.
Answer:
#2 - flows better - use of therefore
and the semi-colon.

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    Yes ... plus the fact that #1 is a run-on!!

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