Please check grammar correctint comma splice sentences and need to use more the 1 method.
Original sentence: Unfortunately Anthony did not live to see the 1920 passage of the Nineteenth Amendment giving women the right to vote,she died in 1906.
My corrected sentence:
Unfortunately, Anthony did not live to see the 1920 passage of the Nineteenth Amendment giving women the right to vote, because she died in 1906.
Thank you in advance for your assists.
Your correction is good. What other method are you going to use?
The following two:
Unfortunately, Anthony did not live to see the 1920 passage of the Nineteenth Amendment giving women the right to vote. She died in 1906.
Unfortunately, Anthony did not live to see the 1920 passage of the Nineteenth Amendment giving women the right to vote, because she died in 1906.
I'd add a comma after "Amendment" in each sentence.
Other than that, they're just fine! Nice!
Thank you for your help
You're very welcome.
Great job in recognizing the comma splice error in the original sentence and fixing it! Your corrected sentence is grammatically correct.
Here's another way to correct the sentence without using a comma splice:
Unfortunately, Anthony did not live to see the passage of the Nineteenth Amendment in 1920, which granted women the right to vote. She died in 1906.
In this revised sentence, I used a subordinating conjunction ("which") to join the dependent clause ("which granted women the right to vote") to the main clause ("Anthony did not live to see the passage of the Nineteenth Amendment in 1920"). This effectively avoids the comma splice error and maintains the clarity of the sentence.
Remember, when correcting comma splice errors, you can also use other methods such as adding a coordinating conjunction (e.g., and, but, or), converting one of the clauses into a dependent clause using subordinating conjunctions (e.g., because, although, since), or separating the clauses into two separate sentences. The key is to ensure that the two independent clauses are either joined correctly or separated appropriately.