I forgot to include the following sentences. Thank you very much
1) My family and I drove from Turin to Pisa.
We didn't have an exciting road trip, because we mainly dorve through boring highways.
2) We spent our time having conversations about scool and relatives. We always talk about this: we have a large family and I don't know all my relatives.
3) After four hours we arrived in Pisa. There (?) we stayed in a four-star-hotel.
It had two indoor-swimming-pool and one outdoor (s).
4) I stayed in a two-bedded room which was very comfortable since it had a TV an8) During "this" trip we did a lot of different things. We also visited Rome while we went on a walking guided tour of the centre of Rome. We visited the Colosseum and the Pantheon.
5) When we returned home we were very sad.The hotel had a lot of facilities such as a snack bar, air conditioning, room service, a dining room and an outdoor swimming pool.
6) We visited a lot of churches such as, for example, the Dom of Florence.
I really want to visit it (not "her" for Florence) again.
1. No comma needed. Spelling >> drove
2. Spelling >> school
Capital W after colon; comma needed
3. First sentence is OK. Third sentence: ...It had two indoor swimming pools and one outdoor pool.
4. I stayed in a double room...
Are there typing errors in this?? Some parts don't make sense.
We also visited Rome where we went on a guided walking tour of the city center.
5. three commas needed
6. "such as" and "for example" are redundant. Pick one and chuck the other.
Dom = Dome
I really want to visit there again.
No problem! Here are the corrected and revised versions of the sentences:
1) My family and I drove from Turin to Pisa. Unfortunately, the road trip wasn't very exciting because we mainly drove through boring highways.
2) During our drive, we spent our time having conversations about school and relatives. This is a common topic for us since we have a large family and I don't know all of my relatives.
3) After four hours, we arrived in Pisa. There, we stayed in a four-star hotel that had two indoor swimming pools and one outdoor swimming pool.
4) I stayed in a comfortable two-bedded room which had a TV. During this trip, we did many different things, and one of them was visiting Rome. We went on a walking guided tour of the center of Rome where we visited the Colosseum and the Pantheon.
5) When we returned home, we felt a bit sad. The hotel we stayed at had many facilities for our use, including a snack bar, air conditioning, room service, a dining room, and an outdoor swimming pool.
6) We also visited several churches during our trip, such as the Duomo of Florence. I was so impressed with it that I really want to visit Florence again.
I hope these revisions help! Let me know if you have any more questions.