Can you please check these sentences for me? Thank you very much.
1)Another important theme is that of equivocation.The witches confuse good and bad (better evil). They are unable to distinguish between good and evil.
2) Closely connected to the theme of equivocation is that of -the one of (are the both possible) false appearances.
3) The fundamental question is whether time is preordained or the result of human activity.
4) Shakespeare's Macbeth contains four main themes. The first theme is that of ambition. Macbeth starts as a brave character but ends as a murderous character as a result of his ambition.
5) Life is like an actor who worries about his time on the (is "the" necessary) stage and then bows out.
6) Life is like a lighthouse which is not shaken by the tempests (and not any tempest) of life.
7) You didn't revise your notes since you reported them word by word. (I know "revise" is not the right word, can you help me find a better word?)
8) The three witches are associated with evil. All four metaphors used by Macbeth underline the transience of life.
7. Some synonyms for "revise" are:
alter, amend, blue-pencil, change, clean up, compare, cut, debug, develop, emend, go over, improve, launder, look over, modify, overhaul, perfect, polish, recalibrate, recast, reconsider, redo, redraft, redraw, reexamine, rehash, reorganize, restyle, revamp, review, rework, rewrite, run through, scan, scrub, scrutinize, study, tighten, update, upgrade
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1) Another important theme is that of equivocation. The witches confuse good and evil. They are unable to distinguish between good and evil.
2) Closely connected to the theme of equivocation is that of false appearances.
3) OK
4) Shakespeare's Macbeth contains four main themes. The first theme is that of ambition. Macbeth starts as a brave character, but ends as a murderous character as a result of his ambition.
5) Life is like an actor who worries about his time on stage and then bows out. If you say "on the stage" you most likely mean the stage in one particular theater, but "on stage" means acting in general.
6) Life is like a lighthouse which is not shaken by the tempests of life.
7) You didn't revise your notes since you reported them word by word. (I know "revise" is not the right word, can you help me find a better word?) How about one of these: paraphrase, memorize, understand.
8) OK
Sure! Here are the corrections and suggestions for each sentence:
1) Another important theme is that of equivocation. The witches confuse good and evil (instead of "better evil"). They are unable to distinguish between good and evil.
2) Closely connected to the theme of equivocation is the theme of false appearances (instead of "the one of false appearances").
3) The fundamental question is whether time is preordained or the result of human activity.
4) Shakespeare's Macbeth contains four main themes. The first theme is ambition. Macbeth starts as a brave character but ends up becoming a murderous character as a result of his ambition.
5) Life is like an actor who worries about their time on stage and then bows out. (The use of "the" is not necessary in this sentence).
6) Life is like a lighthouse that is not shaken by the tempests of life. (Using "any" is not necessary in this sentence).
7) You didn't review your notes since you reported them word for word. (Instead of "revise," the word "review" would be more appropriate in this context).
8) The three witches are associated with evil. All four metaphors used by Macbeth emphasize the transience of life.
I hope this helps! Let me know if you have any other questions.