English

posted by .

Please check for comma errors. If I need to add any commas or take some out please show me where. Thank you!!

You seem to be progressing nicely after your back surgery; however, I do want to remind you of the importance of the instructions that was give to you prior to your discharge from the hospital.
If you follow my instructions exactly, you may anticipate the future with optimism. If you do not follow my instructions exactly, you will jeopardize your recovery; furthermore, you may do irreparable damage to your back.
I have prescribed some medication to alleviate the pain. After spending ten days in the hospital, you will be quite weak. Plan to spend your time in quite rest. Do not lift anything heavier than a glass of water. Do not try to drive or ride in a car until after I have a chance to appraise your progress during your next visit.
You will not notice any appreciable change in the pain level for about a week. However, you should be able to anticipate some relief during the second week that you were home. The pain will diminish slowly during that time forward. The more you try to do; however, the longer the pan will linger.
Your surgery was a complete success; however, be cognizant of the fact that recovery from back surgery is a slow process. If you over due your physical activities you may jeopardize that success. Your recovery is now in your hands.

  • English -

    "The more you try to do; however, . . ."

    Comma, not a semicolon, after do.

    " If you over due your physical activities you . . ."

    Comma after activities.

    The rest looks good.

  • English -

    Thanks

Respond to this Question

First Name
School Subject
Your Answer

Similar Questions

  1. ENGLISH HELP

    What needs to be done to correct the following sentence?
  2. English

    1. I can learn a lot of lessons from the documentary. However, I don't want them to make viewers see the terrible accident. 2. It gives pleasure to us. I laughted a lot because of the star in the program. However, the program contains …
  3. English

    Please check for spelling and commas errors. If commas need to be placed somewhere please let me know where. Please let me know whether you want photographs taking of the altar during the ceremony or after the services. If you would …
  4. English-Help

    Please check for commas errors. If I need to add or take out any commas, please show me where. Have you quit trying to train your dog?
  5. ENGLISH

    Please check for commas errors and capilization. If I need to add or take out any commas, please show me where. Nashville, TN, November 9, 2011: Anisha Carter was named the new president of M& M Industries, and will take commands of …
  6. English

    Reach each sentence if it is correct write c. if it has an error in commas, put the word in () that should be followed by a comma and add the comma The cafeteria is serving chicken soup vegetable stew, or chilli. chicken soup in () …
  7. English

    Read the sentenced Add commas when they are needed. I don't know how to skate but I can learn. Comma after skate Mom and Dad fixed dinner and my sister and I washed the dishes. Comma after dinner I wanted to go yet something held me …
  8. English

    Read the sentenced Add commas when they are needed. I wrote the letter folded it and mailed it. Comma after "letter" and a comma after the first it Justin prepared the soil planted the seeds and watered the garden Comma after soil …
  9. English

    Read the sentenced Add commas when they are needed. This wet rich land is good for growing rice Comma after wet and land The sunset offered bright beautiful colors Comma after bright No I do not think we have any left Comma after No …
  10. comma

    There should be commas around “however” in the following sentence: “Dwayne had planned to take the last flight out to Chicago. It was cancelled, however, because of bad weather.”

More Similar Questions