posted by rfvv .
After Watching Titanic
I like watching movies. I saw the movie Titanic with some of my friends. It was great fun. I especially liked the scenery. The actions of the actors in the movie was realistic. The role of the main actors was romantic. The big iceberg in the sea was also awful.
(Hello. I have posted one more passage. Would you check the sentences? Thank you.)
The actions were...(plural, not singular)
You could make your writing more sophisticated by taking some of the simple sentences and combining them into complex ones.