i need help writting a thesis statement
http://owl.english.purdue.edu/owl/resource/545/01/
http://leo.stcloudstate.edu/acadwrite/thesistatement.html
http://www.unc.edu/depts/wcweb/handouts/thesis.html
well im writting about the effects of facebook how it can affect our relationships and how its easy for stalkers to hack into accounts and how its unhealthy for many individuals because people become addicted to facebook so wha suggestions can you give me for my thesis
Please study the three excellent sites I posted above.
After that, please post your thesis statement. Be sure to write a comprehensible sentence with correct punctuation, spelling, and capitalization.
Someone will be glad to help you perfect it then.
THESIS
Facebook can have negative approaches such as facebook addicton, unsecure privacy, less social interaction, and causes problems with relationships,therefore i believe facebook should be limited by parents and by the users.
is this a good enough thesis??