Cover letter Help

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Okay, so I'm trying to get a job at this grocery store. And I have some questions which I don't get how to answer.

Here is an example of a cover letter I was given. (I'll post the first paragraph)

Dear Manager,

I am applying for the position as a salesperson at Petland. I frequently purchase pet supplies at the store, and always enjoy coming by to see the pets. I saw your job advertisement in the front window, and I would love to be an employee at this business!


Mine is right here.....

Dear Manager,

I would like to apply for the Grocery Store Cashier position you posted at BCjobs.ca. I have enclosed a resume for your review. I enjoy working with the public and want to continue to do with a outstanding company as I believe yours is.


My paragraph should consist of this..

Paragraph #1:
- what position you are applying for
-where you saw the job advertisement
-why you are interested in this job

My questions:

I want to add something like this in my paragraph:

....I frequently purchase pet supplies at the store, and always enjoy coming by to see the pets.

Could I say something like...

I always go grocery shopping, and Im used to the atmosphere there...??

Other question:

-why you are interested in this job

I find this job really interesting as Ive always wished to work at a grocery store, and your company is above all, so it would be fantastic if I get a chance to work with you. (Does this sound normal?)

  • Cover letter Help -

    "continue to do with a outstanding company " = add a word "so" or "that"

    You are on the right track. Write your letter and someone here will be happy to proofread it.

    Sra

  • Cover letter Help -

    Okay, if I post my whole letter on here, will it be kept private?

  • Cover letter Help -

    It won't be kept private; this is a public message board.

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