I am writing a composition for class and need someone to peer edit. No one around knows spanish so I am hoping someone here would be willing to look over it :)

Thank you!

Por primera, tú necesitas cambiar los hábitos. Si tú trabajas mucho para tener una buena dieta, va a hacer mas feliz también. Es tan difícil para mantener una vida saludable. Es esencial que no comas comida basura y hacer ejercicios todos los dias. Recomiendo hacer bicicleta o hacer cinta. Es importante que estires y hacer flexiones antes de los ejercicios. Aunque, si tú haces solo cuando tú tienes extra tiempo, no hacer progressivo.
Tambien, es importante que no comas las comidas malas en este procesa porque es esencial para tener un peso apropiado y mantener una vida mas saludable en general. Sugiero que no compres las comidas basuras y quitar los en tú casa. Es malo que tengas las comidas porque quieres comer. Aunque todo es muy difícil, tú necesitas hacer porque cuando tú vivas una vida apropriada y activa, tú tienes mas energía y tienes un buen humor. Ojala que tengas éxito.

su español es perfecto!!!!!

Diana gave you your peer edit. Now here it comes from a Spanish teacher:

Sorry, not perfect. Learn to make accent marks with the computer. If you don't know how, let us know if you have a PC (more difficult) or a MAC (a "snap") but if a word requires an accent mark, it MUST be there or the word is wrong. Especially in Spanish III, you need to show that you KNOW where they go, if you happen to be headed for an AP or IB exam, which I hope you are!

POr primera = por primera vez OR Primero

fake friend = los hábitos are outfits/clothes/costumes but "habits" are las costumbres

You began in the familiar (tú) so you must be consistent = not va a but vas a hacerte más feliz (you will make yourself happier. (Sometimes if you don't give me the English of what you are trying to say, I could give you the wrong thing; just guessing what you want here.)

Es tan difícil mantener

"junk food?" a noun can NOT modify a noun so t's closer to say "comida de basura = I wouldn't even try but simplify = mala comida OR comida insaludable

y hacer = y que hagas (you set it up to require the Subjunctive)
ride a bike? = andar en bicicleta +???what are you trying to say with "hacer cinta?"

Es importante also requires the Subjunctive so y ou can't get away with "y hacer" y que hagas

Now I definitely need to help because I can not figure out what you want with "si tú haces solo cuando tú tienes extra tiempo, etc. and progresivo has one "s"

También (you got the accent up above but not here

esta procesa (I KNOW you know that an adjective will have the same gender (fem.) and number (sing.) as the noun modified

(I'm not scolding you, just pointing out the KINDS of things you yourself will want to look for when proofreading. Do not proofread immediately but go away from what you have written so it has a fresh appeal when you come back. Peer proofreading is an excellent idea because others always LOVE to pounce on our errors!

There is "comias basuras" again plus quitarlas = 1 word referring to comidas?

It's bad for y ou to have meals? Tis is probably an incomplete thought but excellent use of the Subjunctive

tú necesitas hacerlo = to do IT, non specified noun in mind

tienes buen humor (is sufficient here)

punctuatiion = ¡Ojalá...etc.

Su español es bueno, considerando, pero siento que no sea perfecto.

Sra

im in spanish 5 at my school. so taking into consideration that the spanish isn't meant to be perfect. I say you did a very well job. In further spanish class you will learn.

Sure, I'd be happy to help you peer-edit your composition! Here are some suggestions for improvement:

First, let's start with the title of your composition. It seems that you're writing about the importance of healthy habits. To convey this more clearly, you could consider titling it "The Importance of Healthy Habits" or something similar.

Now, let's move on to the body of your composition. Here are some corrections and suggestions:

1. "Por primera" should be "Primero" to indicate the beginning of your list of suggestions.

2. "Si tú trabajas mucho para tener una buena dieta, va a hacer mas feliz también." This sentence could be improved by rephrasing it as "Si te esfuerzas en tener una buena dieta, también te hará más feliz." This way, you emphasize personal effort and use the correct subject "te" instead of "tú."

3. "Es tan difícil para mantener una vida saludable." Here, you could consider changing it to "Mantener una vida saludable puede ser difícil" to make it a more general statement.

4. "Es esencial que no comas comida basura y hacer ejercicios todos los dias." This sentence should be split into two. First, "Es esencial que no comas comida basura" (It is essential that you don't eat junk food). Then, "y hagas ejercicio todos los días" (and exercise every day). Additionally, the verb "hacer" should be in the subjunctive form, "hagas," to match the previous statement.

5. "Recomiendo hacer bicicleta o hacer cinta." You could improve this sentence by saying "Recomiendo montar en bicicleta o utilizar una cinta de correr."

6. "Es importante que estires y hacer flexiones antes de los ejercicios." This sentence should be adjusted to "Es importante estirarse y hacer flexiones antes de hacer ejercicio" to match the correct form of the verbs.

7. "Aunque, si tú haces solo cuando tú tienes extra tiempo, no hacer progressivo." This phrase is a bit unclear. Are you trying to say that if you only do these activities when you have extra time, you won't make progress? If so, you could say something like "Sin embargo, si solo haces estos ejercicios cuando tienes tiempo libre, tu progreso será limitado." This clarifies your point.

8. "Tambien, es importante que no comas las comidas malas en este procesa porque es esencial para tener un peso apropiado y mantener una vida mas saludable en general." This sentence could be improved by restructuring it as "Además, es importante que no consumas alimentos poco saludables durante este proceso, ya que es esencial para mantener un peso adecuado y tener una vida más saludable en general."

9. "Sugiero que no compres las comidas basuras y quitar los en tú casa." You can improve this sentence by saying "Sugiero que no compres comida chatarra y que la elimines de tu casa." This way, you use the correct term "comida chatarra" and also include the appropriate verb form "elimines."

10. "Es malo que tengas las comidas porque quieres comer." This sentence can be rephrased as "No es recomendable tener comidas indulgentes a mano solo porque tienes ganas de comer."

11. "Aunque todo es muy difícil, tú necesitas hacer porque cuando tú vivas una vida apropriada y activa, tú tienes mas energía y tienes un buen humor." You can rephrase this sentence for clarity and correctness as "Aunque pueda ser difícil, debes hacerlo, porque cuando llevas una vida adecuada y activa, tendrás más energía y disfrutarás de un buen humor."

12. "Ojala que tengas éxito." Great job with this closing sentence! It's correctly used to express your hopes for success.

Overall, your composition is good, and these suggestions will help clarify and improve some of the sentences. Don't forget to proofread for any additional grammar or spelling errors. Good luck with your assignment!