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Can someone check my homework please, I have to write several sentences describing a recent interaction with a friend or family member about personal finance or credit cards. I have to at least write five different pronouns, adverbs, and adjectives in the sentences. And compare the event to one or more similar events. When comparing, use at least three comparatives and three superlatives.
This is what i wrote;


My first experience was at a very young age while in college, with a credit card was a disaster, leaving me quickly in debt. I completely maxed it out and had an extremely hard time keeping up with the monthly payments. During this time my credit score suffered drastically. Not only that, the extremely high interest rate added to my stress of trying to get a handle on the debt building up. My impulsive decision to get a credit card at an early age continues to affect my credit and ability to receive loans.

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    I only see three different pronouns. Others you might use are: he, she, it, they, them, her, his

    You have enough adjectives and adverbs, but you haven't identified them.

    You also haven't included any comparative adjectives or adverbs. See the sites below.

    http://www.eflnet.com/tutorials/adjcompsup.php

    http://pangea.tec.selu.edu/~vmartinez/ETEC644/adverbs3.html

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    adjectives are first, credit, disaster, hard, monthly,high impulsive and early.
    adverbs- quick,completely, extremely,drastically
    cant see the pronouns can you help!

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    The adjectives are correct -- except that "disaster" is a noun, not an adjective.

    Your adverbs are correct. Also -- "very" is an adverb.

    The pronouns you've used are: my, me, I

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    thank you im glad i was on the right track now i have to use comparatives and superlatives

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    Are these good comparison?

    Dan ran quickly.
    Dan runs very fast.
    Fill out the form completely
    I was early to class
    It was extremely hot this weekend

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    Nope.

    Please carefully study the sites I posted.

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    lets try it again how is this
    Mely is taller than Max
    Mely is the tallest of the students

    The cabinets are higher to reach
    The red ladder is the highest in the neighborhood

    I was earlier to class today than I was yesterday.
    The teacher is the earliest in the class
    Dan was quicker to speak
    Dan is the quickest in the team

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    Now you've got it!

    What are you going to add to your paragraph to include comparatives?

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    For the paragraph that's where im a little lost any ideas? Im thinking and reading. thankd for the site it really helped me a lot

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