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7. Which of these sentences is correct or illustrates the best style? (Points : 1)
The report was thorough. Furthermore, it saved the department several hundred dollars.
The report was thorough. It saved the department several hundred dollars.
The report was thorough. The report saved the department several hundred dollars.

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    Personally, (and they are all grammatically correct) I prefer the first one. It could even have been done in one complex sentence! Why do it in two, ask I, when it can be one in one!

    Sra

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