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I need help writing a welcome page for a website. Is this text ok ( when it comes to spelling, grammar and common sence ). This is for my school. Does it sound legal and do all the words sound legal enough.:

Welcome to the Johnson Law Office website

The goal of Johnson Law Office is to provide quality and prompt legal assistance with the respect of the highest standards of the legal profession. Providing a legal assistance to our clients is based on individual approach and thorough analysis in order to resolve problems within the limits of the legal system. Our clients are offered services in all legal areas, in the form of legal advice, drafting of legal documents and representation.

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    The goal of Johnson Law Office is to provide quality and prompt legal assistance according to the highest standards of the legal profession. Providing a legal assistance to our clients is based on our individual approach and thorough analysis in order to resolve problems within the limits of the legal system. Our clients are offered services in all legal areas: legal advice, drafting of legal documents, and representation.

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