posted by Anabelle .
I need help writing an analytical thesis statement.
The topic is
-Analyze the main problems facing the United States under the Articles of Confederation. How far did the US Constitution solve them?-
I have a crappy thesis right now
"The articles of Confederation caused many political and economic problems for the union while the Constitution resolved the political and economic problems it caused social tensions within the United States."
I need someone to help me make it analytical, any ideas?
It's not a thesis statement because you have stated only facts. You haven't included your stance on the topic.