Can you please tell me if the phrases in brackets are possible? Thank you.
1)Wordsworth imagines himself as (like) a cloud which overflows (better: floats over) valleys and hills.
2)Before (Wordsworth) nature was seen as a philosophical entity. Now it starts to be seen as a real living being.
3)He sees nature in a pantheistic way. 3)In the second stanza the poet’s pantheistic view of nature appears (correction: describes nature according to a pantheistic view, gives a pantheistic view of nature?)
4)He says that the daffodils, while kindly moving their heads, outdo the waves in glee.
5) In the poem is presented a pantheistic view of nature (a pantheistic view of nature is present?) according to which every element of nature is in harmony with the whole universe.
1)Wordsworth imagines he is a cloud which floats over valleys and hills.
2)Before Wordsworth, nature was seen as a philosophical entity. Now it starts to be seen as a real living being. He sees nature in a pantheistic way.
3)In the second stanza, the poet describes nature according to a pantheistic view.
4)He says that the daffodils, while kindly moving their heads, outdo the waves in glee.
5) In the poem, a pantheistic view of nature is present, according to which every element of nature is in harmony with the whole universe.
1) Yes, the phrase "Wordsworth imagines himself as a cloud which overflows valleys and hills" is possible. If you want to suggest an alternate wording, it would be "Wordsworth imagines himself as a cloud that floats over valleys and hills."
2) Yes, the phrase "Before nature was seen as a philosophical entity. Now it starts to be seen as a real living being" is possible.
3) Yes, the phrase "He sees nature in a pantheistic way" is possible. However, the suggested correction "In the second stanza, the poet describes nature according to a pantheistic view" is more accurate.
4) Yes, the phrase "He says that the daffodils, while kindly moving their heads, outdo the waves in glee" is possible.
5) Yes, the phrase "In the poem, a pantheistic view of nature is present" is possible. However, the suggested alternate wording "In the poem is presented a pantheistic view of nature" is also correct.